Rough Cut Horror Trailers: focus group feed back

 

Scores: 6,7,7,8,8,8,9,8,8,9,8,9,8,7,6,10,8  

 WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

·         Narrative is good as is the link to historical context-more interesting

·         Was well freaked out

·         Music & everything!!

·         The music was amazing

·         I liked the tree wrapping around the leg

·         The hanging scene was really good

·         The music was well fitted to the trailer

·         The use of text

·         The storyline looks really good

·         Restricted narration at the end

·         The moving plant wrapping around the leg

·         This was increadible!

·         The writing worked really well

·         I loved the fact you told a story and as an audience we could understand and follow it

·         The music is really good and effective!

·         The bit with the lamp is also good

·         Basically loved all of it

·         Falling down the hill

·         Music is good

·         Good cinematography

·         Text in between is good

·         Good song

·         Narrative

·         Twig round the leg bit

·         Nice flash back

·         Rolling down the hill

·         Moving tree and hill bit

·         Music choice

·         Clear narrative

·         Revolving pan shot in the woods

·         Vine grab thing

·         Music

·         Flash backs are cool

·         Music

·         Liked whgen the lady was hung, looked real and scary

·         Music

·         Falling down the hill

·         Music is greate so are the costumes

·         Hanging was cool

·         Really good well planned shots

·         Good set and costume

·         Use of music

·         Good storyline

·         Different variety of lighting

·         Use of multiple camera angles

·         The tree wrapping around the leg

·         Narrative

·         Picks up pace

·         Song has title of film in

·         Sound track, although it could develop into other music

·         Narrative was good

·         Really liked soundtrack

·         Understood narrative well

·         Liked the ivy vine effect

Things that could be improved in our trailer

·         Could possibly add some jump scares

·         The light in the tent is on then in the next it is daylight (needs to be dark)

·         Too up beat soundtrack (maybe a little too much suspense)

·         More stuff needs to happen later in the trailer

·         People running around dragged out too much

·         End scream could become a jump scare

·         A bit of action may help

·         More pace

·         Maybe a little bit less talking

·         Didn’t like the spinning, made me feel sickie

·         Tent scene was dark then light... Didn’t work.

·         See Nicole at the end so we kind of know what’s happened

·         Maybe change text (font)

·         Needs a shot on the jump scare not just music?

·         More close ups and quicker shots.

·         Jump scare maybe needed.

·         Music may need to change

·         More jump scares

·         Dialogue a little louder

·         Needs a visual jump scare

·         Dialogue needs to be louder

·         Dialogue needs to be a bit louder

·         Less shots or shorten duration of running shots

·         Too slow

·         Dialogue bad quality/ too quiet

·         Needs more action